ANNIE DREAMING edit

Proof in hand, reading along I find a missing word – a little word that should be in a phrase so as to make the phrase work. The phrase, as written, is: “glance each other.” The little word “at” is missing. I stick it in the phrase with my pencil, then begin to get aggressive with the instrument.

Once more, I am adding sentences here and there, making small and not so small changes.

I have delayed ANNIE DREAMING again.

The joy of being a writer!

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